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Friday, August 20, 2021

Doing Writing In Lockdown

 

 
Hi everyone it is lockdown again in New Zealand and now we have to do meetings with our teacher and students. I am with Miss Roberts and in my group we are doing writing and we highlight capital letters, full stops, onomatopoeia, punctuation and describing words in our writing. I thought I could share my writing with you. It is called The tunnel.  And what have you done in lockdown?
Bye for now 
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3 comments:

  1. Miss RobertsAugust 20, 2021 at 12:08 PM

    Hi Neve,
    Thanks for sharing your writing, the Magical Tunnel sounds interesting! Well done for highlighting all your language features - and I see you have added a key explaining what the colours mean. Your blog introduction is very good as well, great explanation and use of your Think 6.
    Ka mau te wehi!
    Miss Roberts

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  2. Miss RobertsAugust 20, 2021 at 12:09 PM

    Hi Neve, Miss Roberts again... also I was going to say, perhaps next time you could put your writing on a slide so it is easier to read :-)

    Miss Roberts

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